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pen n. bolsillo's avatar

this is great. we must continue moving. the path of least resistance, or the path with most, we will get there…

small wounds's avatar

Your poems always have really great endings, love it!

Just Kayla's avatar

Thank you for saying so! That means a lot as I have worked really hard on pulling them back these past few months.

Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Gorgeous, Kayla! I’ll be thinking about that first stanza all day.

Just Kayla's avatar

Thank you!

Richbee's avatar

Mercurial shiny bright, maybe tempting to roll around with fingers, but poison if enters a scratch on your skin to vaporize the hope that you will live to tell the story.